https://youtu.be/U2M2GhFSHig
I recieved mostly positive feedback on my last elevator pitch, highlighting my voice was loud and clear and my pitch was easy to follow. I was really happy with what I wanted to say in my second pitch, so I did not make any changes to it. I tried to relax more as that was my main criticism on the initial pitch and make myself appear more comfortable talking about my business concept.
hey Jackson,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job in this pitch, I could tell throughout all the 3 pitches that you became more relaxed and enthusiastic about your product. Great job at taking the feedback and improving your work. You were clear and gave some good points about why/how your product is valuable. Thanks for sharing!
Hey Jackson,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job with this elevator pitch and really listened to the feedback that was given to you by your peers. I really like how you captured your ideas! I felt excited and wanted to keep hearing you speak about your service/product. Overall, I think you do a really good job of taking direction from your peer's and have a great pitch here!
-Morgan Mowery