In all of the responses I received on my elevator pitch, the most common critique was I needed to relax. I was kind of tense in my first pitch and was not using hand gestures. I was able to get my point across, but I appeared uncomfortable in the process which can be perceived as off-putting. For this second elevator pitch, I tried to relax a little more and use hand gestures. I also was able to cut my time down for this pitch to keep it at 90 seconds.
hey Jackson,
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Hi Jackson, thank you for sharing! I think you did a really good job of taking the feedback you got and incorporating it into this new elevator pitch. Your pitch was more fluid and you used more gestures which made you look more comfortable. Your voice was clear and you spoke at a good pace so it was easy to understand what you were saying. Your idea came across clearly and was very detailed.
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