hey Jackson, really good informative pitch! You explained the problem and your solution very well, great job speaking slowly so that the audience can understand. One thing I would work on is just being more loose in front of the camera by using hand gestures, and shortening the pitch a bit as you went a bit over 90 seconds. Overall, great pitch!
Hi Jackson, I think that you did a really great job explaining the opportunity you found and the solution that you came up with. You spoke very clearly and the volume of your voice was very good and made it easy to understand what you were saying. I would maybe work on using some more hand gestures to make the pitch look more natural.
Jackson, Thank you so much for posting your video and sharing with us. It takes a lot of confidence to post these kinds of things. Overall, I think you did a great job of getting your point across to your audience. You spoke well and explained everything really well. Maybe work on relaxing a bit more when giving your speech so that it seems more natural and casual. Other than that, great job. Thanks again, Morgan Mowery
hey Jackson,
ReplyDeletereally good informative pitch! You explained the problem and your solution very well, great job speaking slowly so that the audience can understand. One thing I would work on is just being more loose in front of the camera by using hand gestures, and shortening the pitch a bit as you went a bit over 90 seconds. Overall, great pitch!
Hi Jackson, I think that you did a really great job explaining the opportunity you found and the solution that you came up with. You spoke very clearly and the volume of your voice was very good and made it easy to understand what you were saying. I would maybe work on using some more hand gestures to make the pitch look more natural.
ReplyDeleteJackson,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for posting your video and sharing with us. It takes a lot of confidence to post these kinds of things. Overall, I think you did a great job of getting your point across to your audience. You spoke well and explained everything really well. Maybe work on relaxing a bit more when giving your speech so that it seems more natural and casual. Other than that, great job.
Thanks again,
Morgan Mowery